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I Pull Away by ~Mootchie18:iconMootchie18:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Song


I pull away,
Disgraced.
I pull away,
Defaced.
I pull away,
Confused.
I pull away,
Used.

Your subconscious mind
Infects all that it finds
To follow your whim
And wait on you, hand and limp.

I pull away,
Disgraced.
I pull away,
Defaced.
I pull away,
Confused.
I pull away,
Used.

Tears slide down my cheek.
All this makes me feel weak.
Crying so much is outrageous.
Maybe its because you are contagious.

I pull away,
Disgraced.
I pull away,
Defaced.
I pull away,
Confused.
I pull away,
Used.

Just leave me here,
Consumed in fear.
I will probably do as you did.
And, just like you, hurt another kid.

I pulled away,
Disgraced.
I pulled away,
Defaced.
I pulled away,
Confused.
I pulled away,
Used.

Since you left me alone,
I am no longer your own.
I am, in my way, outrageous,
No longer infected by you, contagious.
©2008 ~Mootchie18
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for the theme "contagious" for *RawEm0tion
yeah, this is NOT a romance thing (or antiromance theme)
it is about................... well i don't really know,
i just liked this idea that i had........
it can be about love, but it doesn't HAVE to be.
interpret it how you will, i'd love to hear your thoughts!
i guess it could be a song.............
(imagine an amazing guitar riff, blasing base lines, thudding drum beats, and [although totally random and unnescessary{but still cool}] a totally adhd techno beat in the background)

Comments/thoughts are greatly appreciated!!!!

Thanky!

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~Shadowyoshi022:iconShadowyoshi022: May 6, 2008, 3:57:55 PM
Cool, its a nice song

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~Shadowyoshi022:iconShadowyoshi022: May 6, 2008, 3:58:11 PM
Well...song poem...thing...

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~Mootchie18:iconMootchie18: May 6, 2008, 4:01:00 PM
lol thanks!!!!!!

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~Mootchie18:iconMootchie18: May 6, 2008, 4:02:04 PM
^^" poem, but with a nice beat, awesome guitar, heavy drum line, and a raging base, it could be a top selling song!
lol

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~Shadowyoshi022:iconShadowyoshi022: May 6, 2008, 4:10:31 PM
no problem

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Wanna play halo 3? Sure I am a poet, but that doesn't mean I'm sissy, so, if you think poetry is for sissy's, hope you like getting noscoped by a bi-sexual, poetry writing, sissy LOL! Gamertag is xxXBarclayXxx
~Mootchie18:iconMootchie18: May 6, 2008, 4:21:13 PM
^.^

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~edwardlover14:iconedwardlover14: May 7, 2008, 5:22:16 AM
I love it!

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~Mootchie18:iconMootchie18: May 7, 2008, 1:06:55 PM
me 2

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~Talking-Pinata:iconTalking-Pinata: May 8, 2008, 4:42:57 PM
This is super! Super super SUPER SUPER!

Read my new poem? X3

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